i sure hope so...cuz i've been thinking to inprove so i think i'll start doing mah homework(my moms pissed of at me...she said she might give up on me...T.T...man that hurted...even GMOS have feelings too) plus mah moms bill is backing that up...so im replying to u by the schools internet...people are reading this shit im sending...2 little midgets...stalking me...creeepy giving me nightmares...
P.S...GMOS means gangster-emo
Oh, yanno when I saw the preview, I thought I saw some really cool shading with yellow highlights and all that.
A suggestion, perhaps take this lineart and use the same color scheme. But put the source of light on one side and use paint strokes instead of solid blocks of color. (I know it's a shirt design but bear with me, it'd look AWESOME.)
I also know that the purple is actually energy coming from the front but it's good practice to mess around with shading and light sources. highlighting with one color and shading with the opposite color (aka, yellow and purple) make for awesome contrast.