a.) too many characters in the first few pages(like SpringLoaded v.1)
b.) a lackluster start which doesn't seem to lead anywhere (like Ace of Abra...also SpringLoaded v.1...man, I really messed that comic up).
This is strange because I have been writing stories for long enough now to know how to write a decent narrative, which makes me wonder what the heck kind of problem I have when it comes to making a comic...
That is until now. I think I worked it out. When I start a comic I get excited, and half plan the thing to death...for example, Ace of Abra was meant to travel throughout the entirety of the Hoenn region, until we got to the Jay fight which both sapped my love for the comic and most of your attention. It was a fun fight, but it was loooooong and I had no scene planned for after.
Accepting so many people into the comic surely didn't help either.
SpringLoaded the original was also planned to include all kinds of sexy stuff...so what happened? I planned the ENDING and not the beginning. This was p. stupid of me.
Long story shortened down, I'm restarting SpringLoaded for sure with less characters and more to the point stuff.
The REAL point in this is to ask if anyone is still interested in Ace of Abra? Yes, I'd probably do a new Ace of Abra story too guys set a few months or so after the first. Opinions are welcome.
-Ace










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